Thursday, November 6, 2008

Sarah's Sea

Hey, Hey, Hey! I just thought I'd post a poem I wrote. Well, I basically wrote it. My friend, Kasen helped a bit, too. :) But, it seriously was my idea and written by me, just arranged by her. Thanks, Cherry Berry!



Sarahʼs Sea
I sit by the sea and lay back my head,
A book lays beside me, the one I just read.
The winter air tickles my nose,
As I shift the sand between my toes.
The sky is dark on this winter afternoon,
With clouds that promise to bring rain soon.
But I donʼt care I'll sit here longer,
To listen to the mighty seaʼs wonders.
I see the gulls as the dance in the wind,
Rocking and swaying,
again and again.
The mighty sea crashes against the rocks,
It crashes again spraying me as it mocks.
The cold winter mist splashes in my face,
And I give in to its cool embrace.
There isn't a place Iʼd rather be,
Then sitting here just me and my sea.

Comment on this post and tell me what you think! Am I very good at poetry at all? Brutal honesty, guys!

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

WOW!

Anonymous said...

this truly moved my heart.
From someone who loves you!
P.S. your so wonderful!

Anonymous said...

This one is my fav! OMG Girl! you should like write a book or some thing!

Anonymous said...

yeah! you would be like so good at it!

Sarah Elizabeth said...

Who on God's green earth posted the comments?!